觉得文字太密集了-1.所有的"WE"可以去掉.2.用短句.3.加重"形象设计", FLYER的PRESENTATION和图片的LAYOUT是关键. 4.打乱重组.(见内)

labelle(桃谷小仙)

本文发表在 rolia.net 枫下论坛Does any one know your lawn better than @@ your earthworm @@?

EdibleScape’s Organic-Plus-Lawn Care makes sure your lawn works hard for you.

Your Benefits:
@@ use less or no water:
@@ cut less and play more:
@@ less aeration is needed
@@ You lawn need less de-thatch and top-dressing
@@Your lawn can become beautiful gardens

We Provide:
@@testing on your soil pH and sedimentation;
We’ll use local micro organisms and soil conditioner to activate your soil. Your grass root will be deeper to get more food and water.

@@100% organic well balanced (6-1.5-2)fertilizer .
With less or no water, your lawn will never over grow.

@@Earthworms which use the thatch as their best food.

@@ Edibles, nematodes, and other nature predators to control weeds and insects, they turn weeds and insects into organic fertilizer for your lawn.

Who Are We?
@@Member of North American Native Plant Society.
@@Member of Organic Landscape Alliance.

Should you satisfied with our service, please tell your neighbour that Earthworm Works!
Please recycle this paper to help your earthworm!
We beat the "the best value price" guaranteed!

Call (416) @@@ @@@@ call any time for free consultation.更多精彩文章及讨论，请光临枫下论坛 rolia.net

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up? -go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!); 2004-2-20 (#1614114@0)

any body? -go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!); 2004-2-20 (#1614145@0)
蚯蚓, make a good ad, it could be a good business. -charleslike(Unionville-愚人); 2004-2-20 (#1614151@0)

Do I make my point? Is it easy to understand? -go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!); 2004-2-20 (#1614154@0)

It is unstandable but you may want to put words like "Save money, Save water, Save Time, Real Green" . Anyone here knows how to do marketing? -charleslike(Unionville-愚人); 2004-2-20 (#1614164@0)

yes you're right, don't save $$ in advertisement, he'll find it's very rewarding. -secretgarden(跳跳蓝莓); 2004-2-20 {227} (#1614181@0)
Ask some agent to write a pretty ads for his business, and put them on the local newspaper or magazine. The better the form is, the more business opportunities can be generated - this works for the western customers especially.

I have asked my Canadian friends too. One of them is the editor of The Blazing Star Magazine. -go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!); 2004-2-20 (#1614189@0)

Here you go. Wish you success in your endeavours! I feel this will be a good business, and you can focus on the rich customers too. My boss uses a garderning company for his house and paid lots of money each month. -secretgarden(跳跳蓝莓); 2004-2-20 (#1614218@0)

Could you recommend my business to him? I know what I am doing. -go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!); 2004-2-20 (#1614244@0)

#1614118 -beibei(beibei); 2004-2-20 (#1614247@0)

^_^ -go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!); 2004-2-21 (#1614846@0)

I would like Chinese to understand my plain English too. -go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!); 2004-2-20 (#1614270@0)

Is It a poem?:) -jennycc(远鸽); 2004-2-20 (#1614274@0)

Similar to yours? -charleslike(Unionville-愚人); 2004-2-20 (#1614283@0)

What do u think:} -jennycc(远鸽); 2004-2-20 (#1614314@0)

Yours are sweet and his smells(organic). -charleslike(Unionville-愚人); 2004-2-21 (#1614649@0)

QQ -go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!); 2004-2-21 (#1614760@0)

No. It is a lawn care ad for making a living. -go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!); 2004-2-20 (#1614285@0)

I see -jennycc(远鸽); 2004-2-20 {38} (#1614319@0)
Do you need fertilizer,I can supply :)

Organic? -go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!); 2004-2-20 (#1614334@0)

Earthworm Works! ~~~~~~~~EdibleScape’s Organic-Plus-Lawn Care makes sure your lawn works hard for you. (Adited) -go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!); 2004-2-21 {1470} (#1614707@0)

本文发表在 rolia.net 枫下论坛Does any one know your lawn better than @@ your earthworm @@?

EdibleScape’s Organic-Plus-Lawn Care makes sure your lawn works hard for you.

@@ You’ll use less or no water:
We’ll test your soil pH and sedimentation;
We’ll use local micro organisms and soil conditioner to activate your soil.
Your grass root will be deeper to get more food and water.

@@ You’ll cut less and play more:
Our 100% organic fertilizer is well balanced (6-1.5-2).
With less or no water, your lawn will never over grow.

@@ You soil will need less aeration:
Your earthworms make a living from aeration your soil.

@@ You lawn need less de-thatch and top-dressing:
The thatch is the best food for earthworms and micro organisms.

@@ We use edibles, nematodes, and other nature predators to control weeds and insects:
They turn weeds and insects into organic fertilizer for your lawn.

@@ We can turn your lawn into beautiful gardens too:
We belong to North American Native Plant Society.
We are member of Organic Landscape Alliance.

@@ We use our resource on your lawn, not on colourful ads:
After our service you will tell your neighbour that Earthworm Works!
Please recycle this paper to help your earthworm!

@@ If any Dr. says “This is our best value price guarantee”
Please see the back page and let’s compare.

@@ We are glad to answer any question about your lawn and gardens:
@ (416) @@@ @@@@ call any time for free consultation.更多精彩文章及讨论，请光临枫下论坛 rolia.net

With less or no water, your lawn will never over grow，不懂， It will never overgrow with no water anyway. -charleslike(Unionville-愚人); 2004-2-21 (#1614714@0)

I mean: (With less or no water, your lawn will stay health and never over grow). Thanks. -go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!); 2004-2-21 (#1614724@0)

觉得文字太密集了-1.所有的"WE"可以去掉.2.用短句.3.加重"形象设计", FLYER的PRESENTATION和图片的LAYOUT是关键. 4.打乱重组.(见内) -labelle(桃谷小仙); 2004-2-22 {1217} (#1615908@0)
本文发表在 rolia.net 枫下论坛Does any one know your lawn better than @@ your earthworm @@?

EdibleScape’s Organic-Plus-Lawn Care makes sure your lawn works hard for you.

Your Benefits:
@@ use less or no water:
@@ cut less and play more:
@@ less aeration is needed
@@ You lawn need less de-thatch and top-dressing
@@Your lawn can become beautiful gardens

We Provide:
@@testing on your soil pH and sedimentation;
We’ll use local micro organisms and soil conditioner to activate your soil. Your grass root will be deeper to get more food and water.

@@100% organic well balanced (6-1.5-2)fertilizer .
With less or no water, your lawn will never over grow.

@@Earthworms which use the thatch as their best food.

@@ Edibles, nematodes, and other nature predators to control weeds and insects, they turn weeds and insects into organic fertilizer for your lawn.

Who Are We?
@@Member of North American Native Plant Society.
@@Member of Organic Landscape Alliance.

Should you satisfied with our service, please tell your neighbour that Earthworm Works!
Please recycle this paper to help your earthworm!
We beat the "the best value price" guaranteed!

Call (416) @@@ @@@@ call any time for free consultation.更多精彩文章及讨论，请光临枫下论坛 rolia.net

太棒了. 快刀斩乱麻, DX一定是行家. -go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!); 2004-2-22 (#1615912@0)

俺修改后, 能把俺的原件发到DX信箱来吗, 一定有重谢 -go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!); 2004-2-22 (#1615917@0)

愿意帮忙,不客气:-) -labelle(桃谷小仙); 2004-2-22 (#1615922@0)

马上, 马上修改. -go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!); 2004-2-22 (#1615925@0)
check your email. -go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!); 2004-2-22 (#1615957@0)

收到俺的email 吗? 今天的太阳难得, 出去享受享受. -go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!); 2004-2-22 (#1616239@0)

Earthworm Works! ~~~~~~~~EdibleScape’s Organic-Plus-Lawn Care makes sure your lawn works hard for you. (Adited again) -go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!); 2004-2-21 {1584} (#1615030@0)

本文发表在 rolia.net 枫下论坛Does any one know your lawn better than @@ your earthworm @@?

EdibleScape’s Organic-Plus-Lawn Care makes sure your lawn works hard for you.

@@ You’ll use less or no water:
We’ll test your soil pH and sedimentation;
Based on the test result, we’ll use local micro organisms and soil conditioner to activate your soil. Let your grass roots dig up to 18 inches for more food and water.

@@ You’ll cut less and play more:
Our 100% organic fertilizer is well balanced (6-1.5-2).
With less or no water, your lawn will stay health and never over grow.

@@ You soil will need less aeration:
Your earthworms make a living from aeration your soil.
They are known to tunnel as deep as two metres!

@@ You lawn need less de-thatch and top-dressing:
The thatch is the best food for earthworms and micro organisms.

@@ We use edibles, nematodes, and other nature predators to control weeds and insects:
They turn weeds and insects into organic fertilizer for your lawn.

@@ We can turn your lawn into beautiful gardens too:
We belong to North American Native Plant Society.
We are member of Organic Landscape Alliance.

@@ We use our resource on your lawn, not on colourful ads:
After our service you will tell your neighbour that Earthworm Works!
Please recycle this paper to help your earthworm!

@@ If any Dr. says “This is our best value price guarantee”
Please see the back page and let’s compare.

@@ We are glad to answer any question about your lawn and gardens:
@ (416) 294-@@@ call any time for free consultation. We do not bug you.更多精彩文章及讨论，请光临枫下论坛 rolia.net

stay "healthy" ; Your earthworms make (a) living "by aerating" your soil; nature predators - 似乎不如直接说“bio-control agents". -patpat(侃侃伐坛); 2004-2-22 (#1615863@0)

我的感觉是,作为广告, 这篇实在太长太罗嗦. 需要大幅度删减. -anniezhang(铁皮屋顶上的猫); 2004-2-22 (#1616113@0)

桃谷小仙~~(#1615908)~~正运气发威~~百炼成钢. -go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!); 2004-2-22 (#1616216@0)

hehe, 你真可爱!看一下我对你发给我的文本的一点小修改(见EMAIL) -labelle(桃谷小仙); 2004-2-22 (#1616250@0)

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觉得文字太密集了-1.所有的"WE"可以去掉.2.用短句.3.加重"形象设计", FLYER的PRESENTATION和图片的LAYOUT是关键. 4.打乱重组.(见内)

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