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The Blog of lavender_swing

The Series of 花瓣雨

花瓣雨系列之 What if?

annayin(??)
What if

What if I am wrong,
that the wind brings your fragrance,
that the twining trails thirst for our footprints,
that the beach cradles those waves deep from the ocean?

What if I am wrong,
that the moon waxing or waning in our pattern,
that the oasis is only another cloud castle,
that the voyage sets off on wrong wings?

What if
the door I fear to knock at will protect
no blossom to burst,
no rustle from leaves?

What if
there will be no fire to
take away my breath
as the starry night ends in a knot?

What if
I will leave with no answer?
What if
you will dig my ashes sometimes later.
(#1672947@0)
Last Updated: 2004-4-5
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Replies, comments and Discussions:

  • 枫下拾英 / 乐韵书香 / 花瓣雨系列之 What if? -annayin(??); 2004-4-5 {625} (#1672947@0)
    • 刺！写的勉强！ -spine(刺); 2004-4-5 (#1673382@0)
      • MM,你的刺真厉害:P -lizpan(空白); 2004-4-5 (#1673407@0)
        • 刺！何时JJ也火眼金睛？叹！幸亏现在还是秘密！ -spine(刺); 2004-4-5 (#1673416@0)
          • 盾来!再说就要穿了:D:D -lizpan(空白); 2004-4-5 (#1673427@0)
      • I am in a good mood after writing this. I only concern the last line, others I think good. -annayin(??); 2004-4-5 (#1673624@0)
        • Ha ha. It is time to poke you back. Btw, will you join the poet group? -annayin(??); 2004-4-5 (#1673629@0)
          • 我手笔差，只刺不写，估计不会的了：） -spine(刺); 2004-4-5 (#1673645@0)
        • 理解！有话说不清楚，有心表白不尽之感觉！你有心写就有感动，我无心读就有木讷！如若不信，一周后再来看这首！检视自己，当抛开自己！ -spine(刺); 2004-4-5 (#1673630@0)
          • Wrong, My hubby said: " You are the lastest one to suicide". So you see, I am very stubborn, never will 抛开自己. (revised) -annayin(??); 2004-4-6 {583} (#1675177@0)
            What if I am wrong,
            that a wind brings your fragrance,
            twining trails thirst for our footprints,
            a beach cradles waves from its ocean?

            What if I am wrong,
            that a moon waxing or waning in our pattern,
            an oasis is only another cloud castle,
            a voyage sets off on wrong wings?

            What if
            a door I fear to knock will shut
            no blossom to burst,
            no rustle from leaves?

            What if
            there will be no fire to
            take away my breath
            as a starry night ends in a knot?

            What if
            I will leave with no answer?
            What if
            you will dig my ashes sometimes later?
            • 文字头重脚轻，意境头轻脚重。赞叹之余有醉八仙之感！ -spine(刺); 2004-4-7 (#1675205@0)
    • There is no wrong or right. It is just feelings. If you feel it is right. It will be never wrong. -go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!); 2004-4-5 (#1673657@0)
      • Nice to hear from you again. How about your business? -annayin(??); 2004-4-6 (#1673866@0)
    • 希望您能参加,为我们华人争光。好运！
      -jackysandy(Sandy); 2004-4-7 (#1676140@0)

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