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A city we live in ( RainRain, Spine, winterbreeze, jasonsandy and other friends, please give me suggestions) For thestar poetry contest..

My son paints it as a crystal ball,
lakeshore breezes dancing in rustle;
slim graceful buildings shooting up,
as his birthday candles were lighting.

He draws a crescent among the twinkle,
whispers to the soft gliding wing;
His canvas was primed with an angel,
her sheer pattern as shining.

I cradle starlets and kind fairy,
In his sweet dreamland,
Cuddle him away the cloudy outside,
Fear it too close to his vision.

But it, a broken city is,
like crystal shattered to piece.
Pale sky as a encaged shell,
bloody scenes railed with yellow ribbons.

I disguise the crystal without seams,
Coat it in crimson.
The color soon will peel with truth,
I wonder how long it could be hidden.
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  • 枫下拾英 / 乐韵书香 / A city we live in ( RainRain, Spine, winterbreeze, jasonsandy and other friends, please give me suggestions) For thestar poetry contest..
    My son paints it as a crystal ball,
    lakeshore breezes dancing in rustle;
    slim graceful buildings shooting up,
    as his birthday candles were lighting.

    He draws a crescent among the twinkle,
    whispers to the soft gliding wing;
    His canvas was primed with an angel,
    her sheer pattern as shining.

    I cradle starlets and kind fairy,
    In his sweet dreamland,
    Cuddle him away the cloudy outside,
    Fear it too close to his vision.

    But it, a broken city is,
    like crystal shattered to piece.
    Pale sky as a encaged shell,
    bloody scenes railed with yellow ribbons.

    I disguise the crystal without seams,
    Coat it in crimson.
    The color soon will peel with truth,
    I wonder how long it could be hidden.
    • 我更喜欢另外一篇。但是不知道大众口味:(