RainRain, Spine, winterbreeze, jasonsandy and other friends, please give me suggestions) For thestar poetry contest.. Which one is better? (1678216) A city we live in
-annayin(??);
2004-4-8(#1678223@0)
Please review revised 3. The contest limit its theme related to Toronto. So my previous poems may not be qualified. So...
-annayin(??);
2004-4-10(#1679413@0)
Ok, we got it. We think "Cecilia" will be the best topic. How about "Don't cry for me, Toronto?"In fact a positive poem will be better. Let's hear the little angle singing love songs in the heaven, and "Don't cry for me, Toronto".
We have a feeling they will like this kind of topics.
At the same time, we also have a feeling you might win the prize but the "Winning Poem" posted in Rolia won't be set as "精华" or "导读".
Well, just enjoy the good sunshine and Good luck! We are all standing by you.
-jackysandy(Sandy);
2004-4-12{419}(#1681746@0)
Thanks. Even it is far away for the contest. It is a good challenge for me to practice.
-annayin(??);
2004-4-13(#1682338@0)
I agree jackysandy and your suggestion. Here it means my poem, my skill is far away for the contest.... But I will try, 1 year, 2 years....
-annayin(??);
2004-4-13(#1682457@0)
Thanks a lot. The poetry contest is very difficult, since it limit one per person and theme as toronto...Though mostly it will waste my time and money (5 for join), I still want to try.
-annayin(??);
2004-4-8(#1678329@0)
请进：：）I wish to paint it in crimson,
like sun blazing in its morning glory,
and maple leaves flaming in autumn mountain.
和
I wish,
it can be painted in crimson,
as sun blazes
in the morning,
with maple leaves flaming.
So quick. I know what you mean. But I don't want to be very negative. So that is why, too long... Where you hope to cut?
-annayin(??);
2004-4-9(#1678985@0)