Topic: Mr. Fullmoonnight, could you please check this paragraph for me in terms of grammar, tense and so forth? Thank you very much. :) Let me if there is any mistake there. @华人论坛:枫下论坛 The Rolia Forum of

枫下佳缘 / 快乐单身 / Mr. Fullmoonnight, could you please check this paragraph for me in terms of grammar, tense and so forth? Thank you very much. :) Let me if there is any mistake there.Knowing the languages of the host society enhances the capacity to obtain information about the new society--information about schools, health care, legal rights and so forth. Langues also is a form of human capital in that it influences where workers are hire, their job productivity and thus, under the assuptions of neo-classical economics, their wages. -asker(asker); 2006-1-1 {357} (#2691923@0)

The original article is so much better. I was stunned by Asker's claim this morning. :-) -bookworm(晕晕); 2006-1-2 (#2693042@0)
The original paper looks easier to understand. I was a little bit surprised last night . I was wondering how could Asker write such kind of article. -fullmoonnight(圆月夜.老狼); 2006-1-2 (#2693120@0)

workers are hired, ..... under the assumptions of.... -asker(asker); 2006-1-1 (#2691927@0)
Language also is a form.... -asker(asker); 2006-1-1 (#2691987@0)
The above are corrections of typos, sorry. -asker(asker); 2006-1-1 (#2691988@0)

老狼刚才在学钢琴,一个网友给我上课.12345671刚学会.其实你的英语很不错了,只是还缺点语感.你的学习精神实在另老狼鼓舞.我现在就看看 -fullmoonnight(圆月夜.老狼); 2006-1-1 (#2692320@0)

她只教我基本的指法.然后恐怕就要收费了.比如双手弹12345671,17654321,12345671234567, 76543217654321.我今天是突发奇想.她说她妈妈都学会了.我又不老.刚好家里有个电子琴.就学了. -fullmoonnight(圆月夜.老狼); 2006-1-2 (#2692529@0)

Faint. Let me change a little bit.Studying languages of a society improve the ability to obtain information of this new society -iwantcar(EnjoyStudying); 2006-1-1 {93} (#2692358@0)

You can not improve ability. You can only improve a person's ability or improve the ability of a person. -fullmoonnight(圆月夜.老狼); 2006-1-1 (#2692402@0)

其实language和society有什么直接的联系呢？language of the animals可以明确的被理解为动物的语言，可是language of the society是什么意思？社会的语言？怎么解释？ -maxtrixgg(MaxtrixGG); 2006-1-2 (#2692558@0)

我只改了3个地方. 1. enhances 后面必需要有Somebody's 2. capacity should be capability 3. human capital 后的in似乎不妥当. [可能还有什么我就看不出来了]Knowing the languages of the host society enhances a person’s capability to obtain information about this new society—information about schools, health care, legal rights and so forth. Language also is a form of human capital that it influences where workers are hired, their job productivity and thus, under the assumptions of neo-classical economics, their wages. -fullmoonnight(圆月夜.老狼); 2006-1-1 {367} (#2692390@0)

我是请高手来指正的不是请你来看我放屁的.放屁没见过?回家关上厕所门,自己试试.大惊小怪.[对了,提个醒--打开抽风机] -fullmoonnight(圆月夜.老狼); 2006-1-1 (#2692462@0)

It is always safe to say "about". I need some advice/suggestion/information/books/etc... about something -fullmoonnight(圆月夜.老狼); 2006-1-1 (#2692435@0)

just searched "enhance capability" on google and it gave me 21,800,000 results. This is one the ways a UofT Linguistic prof uses to show his students statistics about word usuage -sunding(sundin); 2006-1-2 (#2692542@0)

个人认为有a person's 的时候读起来更通顺.说不上来为什么,没有a person's感觉别扭.我也查了google,没有a person's的例子都和本文的情况不太复合. -fullmoonnight(圆月夜.老狼); 2006-1-2 (#2692557@0)

明白了,觉得是因为后面有个obtain information.如果没有a person's,这句话就不知道谁要去obtain information. -fullmoonnight(圆月夜.老狼); 2006-1-2 (#2692572@0)

老狼是英语老师？这段话用了一些我看不懂的单词和组合，能不能用中文告诉我是什么意思先？ -maxtrixgg(MaxtrixGG); 2006-1-2 (#2692545@0)
我觉得这段话的问题最重要的不是拼写和语法问题，而是搭配和表达方式的问题。建议多看英文原版电影。刚刚看完The 40 year old virgin，强烈推荐！ -maxtrixgg(MaxtrixGG); 2006-1-2 (#2692569@0)

这是Asker要写的一个论文.口语中怎么会出现这么复杂的语法结构?大的语法结构和大词汇是用来表现作者的精湛思维的工具.你可能会在口语中听到Big word,但是不会有大的语法结构诸如从句之类 -fullmoonnight(圆月夜.老狼); 2006-1-2 (#2692578@0)

天哪，你就不要搞笑了。论文写到我都搞不清她在说什么也实在是太厉害了！我读后第一感觉是一惊，怎么我的英文这么差，没看懂。第二感觉是她也许不太熟悉英文的习惯用法。 -maxtrixgg(MaxtrixGG); 2006-1-2 (#2692600@0)

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