an excellent piece of eroticism. however, the "Volvo SUV" makes it less authentic and therefore downgrades what could have been more romantic and erotic. A Volvo is probably the last thing a car fanatic would put on his short list. not tocriticise -- just an observation.
-the_dumb_one(dumb_and_dumber);
2009-8-9{33}(#5474091@0)
lawyer? I truly wish I were a lawyer -- if nothing else just for the fact they are the only ones who can afford a Porsche after the meltdown of Wall Street, of course, at our expense as salary earners.
-the_dumb_one(dumb_and_dumber);
2009-8-10(#5475637@0)
Good writing! If changing "乳房" to "胸口" will be better.
-waitingmine(为你而来);
2009-8-9(#5473103@0)
One more: "WINDSHIELDS" to "wipers"
-waitingmine(为你而来);
2009-8-9(#5473126@0)
when crazy girl meets angel man~~ enjoy your way of writing erotica and fantacy. and look forward to your next piece
-uptowngirl(若初 Bella Luna);
2009-8-10(#5474585@0)