英语上的小建议: Dead 听上去比较生硬，建议改成 lost their lives. for last sentence: "thanks" 是口语化的英语, 建议改成Thank you) "for your support and for your help" 有重复，建议改成: for your [precious] help and support. 抛砖引玉，望斧正。
-stgeorge(donggua);
2008-5-17(#3716@49)
One suggestion: Together, we can make a differenceinstead of : you can make a difference..
Just a suggestion..
Can you please update this? I will use it next week in my workplace. Thanks so much.
-ottawahill(hill);
2008-5-17{152}(#4174@49)
one more suggestion: Millions are made homeless....I think those who survived but lost their homes need much help to rebuild their homes. Donations would make a big difference for them.
-ottawahill(hill);
2008-5-17{134}(#4175@49)
Millions (are / were??) make homeless...俺的英语不好, 那位大大给看看,谢了
-xuefeng2000(飞天小神猪);
2008-5-17(#4192@49)
Thanks so much for your great work.
-ottawahill(hill);
2008-5-17(#4176@49)
加上了
-xuefeng2000(飞天小神猪);
2008-5-17(#4211@49)
one recommendation:14000 STILL buried..
-juatsayit(铁血剑);
2008-5-17(#4188@49)
